Monday, May 25, 2015

Weshavan snow storm

As I slowly walked to the door cold rushed down my spine like a car driving on ice. I could see the thick snow falling slowly on the ground like a feather.  The freezing cold snow froze my face then I sprinted back in my house.
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  1. Mrs CarrMay 25, 2015 at 11:26 PM

    Weshavan I would have wanted to sprint home too if I had cold air rush at my face.

    Star - I like how you used a simile "like a car driving on ice". I t made me really picture what the cold air felt like.

    Wish - Write more sentences to include more details about this the moment in time.

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