motor cross magic Jarrod

Pup, pup, pup, Shane tried to start his motor-cycle.

It turned out he had no fuel . So I said "Check the fuel tank."
" Is it that ?"
"Noooooooo! It won't be that." Shane said. Beeeeep, it was the start of the awesome bike race. "Oooooooooooh I know what it is. It's the fuel tank."
 "That's what I just said". 
"Oh.". Well what are you waiting for get me some fuel."ok,ok, jeuss idiot"So i went to get some fuel and i accidently got the boost fuel so i drunk some to go faser but it sorta kinda did make me slower "weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee i can fly" But it was me going to heaven any way back to Shane he reved his engine an got past all of the other guys apart from this one guy that was  cheating by using hp ( horse power) and he and i still got in front of him and it was won by me "yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!" i said.   ASTALAVESTA LITTLE GUY said an asian guy i was sared and pooed my long johns i went to the tolit and it stunk ahhhhhhahhhhhhhh it stinks i died the end. dundundun

THE LITTLE BOY FROM CHINA - JOSH

The little Chinese boy loved snakes, his favorite type of snake was a boa constrictor. He talked about them every day and every birthday he asked for a boa constrictor. One year his  parents got him one because they got sick of him asking every year. Two years later he was giving it a bath and the Chinese  boy felt hungry so he started to eat a sausage in front of the big snake.  His tummy rumbled and his tummy hurt. The snake's favorite food was sausage so the snake got jealous.  The snake was angry because he liked sausages and the boy didn't share.  So the snake squeezed the boy to death.  His guts flopped everywhere over the red tiles.  It smelt like vomit and the smell stunk out the whole house. His mum wondered what the smell was so sprinted upstairs and saw    him lying in a pile of blood and guts with the snake eating him.  

THE END

Jordie

one upon a time there was little Chinese baby. He was 8 months old. his family was poor and he had to bath himself. one day when he was having a bath the door was wide open and a boa constrictor crept through the door. I crept towards  the  bath then it stuck its fangs into the babies head and the bath went red  the snake grabbed the baby and took it out the door.

 

 

 

 

THE END

 

 

Sabre tooth hunting Christiaan

Roar!I called  out to my pack "What's wrong sabre? " Toothy said in a dark evil voice. " I heard a rustle in the light green leafy bushes. Ribbit I was scared onto my back. " Lets go hunting"  Toothy said. Look there is a dark shadow at the shadow pond suddenly our pack came, then I said "attack" but the shadow called his dark pack.

katie the mermaid story

the mermaid story

Woosh, I splashed into the water wishing to be a mermaid . Suddenly I turned into one, what I've been wishing for  for my whole entire life I said to myself. I was adorable with glittery sparkles all over.  My favourite colour was pink. my baby turned into one too. She was adorable with  glittery sparkles all over I  had to hold her so she wouldn't brake her tail bye falling so I took her home  and and I went home and I  went shopping well her big sister looked after her I got seaweed chips and meat and veges for tea tonight then I went home and looked after my baby.

To be continued 

Secret Misson Dylan

I was a secret agent police . I had a mission to get baddies. Then I saw a baddy . I told my friends...I punched the baddy in the face.I said "Lllll." My hand felt like there was no blood. Bang, my ears went beeeeep. There  was a boom. A guy died.  His blood came pouring outof his head and tummy. I saw the baddies. They stabbed 3 people. They had blood come out of them. I could hear pshhhh and dripping blood.  I could smell smoke from the bomb.

   

The snake moster-Mason

The snake monster-Mason

A long time a go there was a little chinese boy. He had a bath in a bucket. One night he had a bath and a snake slithered in the bath with the boy, it bit him then it swallowed him. The parents were looking for him for 10 years. The parents felt like  big fat losers.

Zach

Suddenly I got shooved into a rocket and blasted into space because my planet  Middle Earth was  under attack . By zashens my name is Chase.  Where I'm going I don't know. CRASH I landed. This  is going to sound weird but it's my new planet,3rd earth.  There are flying cars, robot police and most coolest one of all crystal  swords . That is ssssssssssssooooooooooooo cool but when I got into this world I got super powers. I could shape shift.

Hippo Stella

Hippo

I felt proud of my little baby Hippo. It was his first time in the refreshing water.I swam beside him.He is just the right size and he can just touch the bottom.''Come on,it's lunch time''said the zoo keeper. But he didn't, he just splashed the water all around. I tried pushing him.Then he just turned around and ran under me.I hopped out of the cold water. I walked to the food. Suddenly I saw my baby was not in the  water.The zoo keeper shouted...''HELP''. Then I turned around and in front of my eyes. He was out the cage.    

agent cody banks Kane

I was stranded in the middle of the Amazon and my only tools were my spy tools like my crystal grappling hook, my pitch white exploding mentos, my lucky spy watch and my best one, my super powers.  By the way my name is Rex and I work for the C.I.A  and my code name is K12. It's the end of the world and my only way out of here is to grapple hook out of here...

michael's story.

"Vroom"  Bob's motor-bike started and the crowd roared.  He could se all the x game signs.  He was so nervous as if he bailed all the crowd would laugh at him (and if you haven't noticed he is in the x-game final and needs 8 points to win).  He revved up his engine.  He put both his feet on the pedals then he zoomed up the biggest jump and did a 360 tuck no hander back flip. He smashed into the ground and bailed.  It came around to Bob's turn again and he now needed 12 points to win he zoomed out the tunnel the crowd rowed again.he went up the jump and tried the siam trick as before because he new it would get him 19 points.he went up the jump and did the trick then boing he landed softly back on his bike.The commentator said "thats a big 19 points to win it for Bob Billy.Three hours later he was back at the  X Games stadium for the presentation of the medals.  First they said "Tom Hutchins for 3rd place." The crows all cheered for him, then they all went quiet.  They announced Ethan Mirfen for second place.  They also cheered for him.  They ten announced Bob Billy for first place.  The crowd all roared.  Then they played the NZ national anthem and put up the three flags of the winners.  When the song was playing they bought out the medals.  Then the crowd clapped and cheered.  Then they bought out the million dollar cheque because that was the prize for winning the X Games.  But it still wasn't enough to buy a new motor bike as he smashed his one when he bailed.

Week 5 Learning Goals 4th June

Kane, Zac and Dylan  

We are learning to use compound sentences.

Jarrod, Micheal, Christian, Stella, Katie

We are learning to use complex sentences.