The fishing trip by Jarrod

The fishing trip

"Splash" I heard my hook hit the water. Suddenly I saw a big silver, fish jump. I reeled in my rod. I struggled to real in my fish but it came onto the humungous boat. The boat had a big cab  by the front of the boat. Yay I get to drive the boat. I almost crashed. 

MASON JACOB OLSEN--Killing my snowman

                                                  Killing my snowman

" K splat" I thew a bright red Apple at the snowman's head.  The snow was flying in the air.   I felt happy that we were allowed to kill our super white snowman.  When it's head fell me and Danny jumped on it's head and it's body and we both laughed happily.   It had a green hunting beany hat.  The eyes and half of the head flew off.   It crumbled and cracked into little balls like hail.

THE RUGBY GAME by Jordie

''Come on Dad" I said because he was taking a long time to get ready for the rugby game. We were versing the worst team in the grade. When we arrived there was ice on the pitch. We started doing training. I almost came first in the sprints. but James was the fastest in the team.

Die Snowman Josh M

Whoosh! Bang! My long , brown cricket bat went flying into the little icy snowman. His broken
head flopped on the ground like a fish out of the water. I kicked the body with my big black gum boots off the deck and it exploded onto Ethan. He got angry because it fell down his top.

Anaconda attack by Christiaan

Vrrm the boat roared as we went down the river. There was a crashing sound in the foggy distance, it kept on creeping closer and closer . Woosh, the boat went flying down a water fall. Crash! the giant boat hit something at the bottom of a rocky pit " help" someone cried. But I couldn't get up and I saw something that was green and was coming for me.  

Zac - Snow

All you could hear is shouting and laughing until you turn around .  Whoosh, as the snowball hit me twice one came at my face.   My teeth were frozen cold  so I went inside and had a hot chocolate. Then I went out side to gain revenge so i got that kid back man revenge is sweet.

Hunting for food by Dylan

I was hungry, so were the others. So we hunted for food there were 36 of us .Then I said "wow".   We saw a fish then I got it .It was enormous.  Then crkkkkkk I said "the ice is breaking. Then a guy fell in. He died.  Luckily we had swords to hang on to the ice.We hung on the ice but two more guys fell in and died .Then I said jump.

 to be continued 

snow day by michael

"Awww" I looked the gray window it's snowing I yelled to my brother he said"year right".I was jumping on my blue bed I could also smell breakfast cooking in the kichen.I could hear the mattress going  "creek" I thought it would snap I could feel my bed under me.Mum said "come on Michael I have breakfast cooking.

Snow - Stella

SNOW FALL


''Wow, it's snowing''as I looked out the window.Me and Ruby wanted to play in it right away.So we raced down stairs.We told mum.''Can we please go in the snow mum?'' Ruby said. ''Yes,dress up warm''. We ran to the front door.And I chose a warm jacket and gumboots then I put on warm pants. We chased the the other door .A freezing cold snow flake landed on my nose.A few minutes later we had an awesome snow ball fight.Like an hour later I tripped up on Ruby's snow fort.
THE END.

Disney on ice- Katie

Disney  on ice

I was amazed when I saw the amazing rink it was beautiful with big gardens and a big beautiful castle that kept changing themes . First a beautiful fairy called Tinkerbell came on she was the main character , of it it was Tinkerbell she had a wand that had glitter in it had fairy dust in it. she put it on the ice it was awesome .

Snow - Kane

Thanks mum!My mum just gave me a soft biscuit.I looked out the hard window.there were white snowy beads everywhere.I tried to eat my biscuit but my mouth fell down and my biscuit  fell to the ground.My mum shouted out to me.What was that.my biscuit.she was furious.but I cleaned it up before she saw it.I heard the soft snow hit the hard land

by Kane

THE BIKE TRIP by Jordie

Me and my lovely friend Josh decided one day to go on a big biking trip . It took a while to get there but when we arrived dad
  noticed he had left his helmet at home so he went home and me and Josh went on our own . after while we saw a couple of moose wandered off and they walked away from the pack and started to charge at Josh.  Then whack the moose hit Josh in the side of the neck.  I thought his life was in my hands.  I jumped off my bike and grabbed a big stick for Josh and he was knocked out.  When I got closer I saw the blood was squirting out. I ran back and got my cellphone and got the helicopters to pick him up.  I had just saved my friend's life.

Christiaan The Shark Attack

Bang!!! I heard something and then I went down into the engine room and I saw the engine was fine.  Thud, there was another one so I went back on the deck.  Then I saw that there was something coming up to the surface.  Crunch, the giant sea animal bit onto the ship.  Then I noticed there was more coming for me.  I flicked my hand to start the engine but it wouldn't stop.  Suddenly my eyes flung over to one of the sharks heading away.  So I tossed a rope onto the shark and it tossed and turned trying to get away from me.  Then it stopped and was coming towards my boat...

Dylan Kayaking

I was ready to go on my kayak. So as I paddled as my eyes flashed with danger it was a waterfall. It was deathly. I tried  to  paddle but the water was too powerful but I survived. I just noticed that this area is so dangerous.Then I saw fearful piranhas. I was scared.  They were biting my boat. Luckily I had TnT. Then I threw it in the water. Bang they swam away but my boat tipped over.

katie the circus

The Circus
 I was fizzing with excitement when the lights went off. The show was about to began, first they introduced the man from Australia they did flips over the chairs and all did hand stands on top of  chairs. I thought it was amazing. At the end which was sad there were people on a rope they tied their feet to it and hung upside down . The man did it first then the girl climbed to the top over him she did a hand stand holding the rop it was awesome.  Then boy got down she stood up and she did tricks for a bit then she untied the rope then the adults and children counted down 5,4,3,2,1 drop. She dropped  the boy caught her . It frightened me when she fell.

Josh M-lion

There was a lion on sticks chasing a giraffe. The lion got ready to pounce. The lion has a big mane. It did a big pounce on to the giraffes back. The giraffe fell to the ground like a big rock. It shrieked loudly when the lion bit its neck.

the moose attack by michael

I was out for a casual bike ride in the forest, when I saw a flat straight.  I sped up.  I was going as fast as I could, then smack a moose smashed into me. I went flying into a tree. The moose pulled off my arm. I could see a spurt of blood spraying out. I could see it lying on the ground. It looked all flimsy and the veins looked like pipes and it smelt really bad. Then it got into its pulling motion on my head next thing I knew I died. The end by Michael

Zac Deltora

This is Deltora. It was consumed by the evil Shadow Lord. He has these grey guards. They leave these little marks. It means they have been here. I'm Leif and this is Barda and Jasmine. The king and queen went into hiding because of the Shadow Lord .The belt of Deltora had seven gems that got scattered all over Deltora in the worst of the worst places, the Forest of Scilence.  The Lake of Tears,  City of Rats, Shifting Sand, Dread Mountain, Maze of the Beast and the Valley of the Lost are all guarded by ugly monsters and here's the map.

Jarrod Bike Ride

Whoosh, I could feel the wind rushing against my face. I was riding my red,stripy,mountain bike on the track and someone was in front of me. Suddenly a moose rammed the guy in front of me off his bike. "That dirty old moose" I said. Oh well he will survive. So I left him to heal. It was starting to get dark so I headed back but in the distance I could see a big green blob. I biked towards it, when I got closer i saw that it was a broccoli house "just what I wanted". That's what I wished for when I was ten and it came true in 25 years. Ok it is pitch black now but there was a light switch. i flicked it on and there was the bed I went closer and climbed in and went to sleep. Oops I almost forgot to turn off the light so I got out of bed and turned it off and crawled back into bed. I'm so tired... Ding,ding,ding the alarm went. I started travelling again. I came to a road but it wasn't any road it was a magical road. I drove down it and there was my house. Ok I'm scared.

         

Stella

Knock,knock,knock went Chris at the door. So they came in and we showed them mums funny book.It's  called 'How Do You Know Your Cat Is Plotting To Kill You' and it comes with a poster.Dad got it for her on Mothers Day.  My cousin got another guinea  pig.It is called Pixie and his other one is called Percy.  Then he was carrying an iPad .He sat the sofa and played mind-craft  And  he found plenty of shiny gold. Pixie is white and Percy is brown,black and white . Pixie's eyes are orange they are creepy. Pixie would not stop moving and Percy would not eat any food.

MASON-My secret fishing spot not

     MASON-My secret fishing spot not

"broom broom"stepped on the pedal and drove fast out to my secret fishing spot. "zip"I cast out just out in the best spot to get fish. "I curt one"I yelled. I put it in the bucket. I cast again I cart one again "cop" I put it in the bucket, "what where is the first one"cop""give it back you dumo bear."cop munch crunch snap cop crunch"I got kill a fid from the bear. I full into the water lots of people spoted me including bob. He cried for a long tim. The blood pored every where in the water and I was deid for every and could not ring me back to life. 
                                                        THE END!!!

Kane Deltora

Crunch, crunch, crunch went the tiny leaves under me.My dad had screamed out to me to come to the hard castle.Creak I opened the giant door my dad was in bed fading.He grabbed out a silver shiny belt and said put the magical gems into it. "What gems?" said Lief."The gems of Deltora, but to get them you need to fight furious beasts.When you get all the gems you will have to fight the Shadow Lord with the gems.""But I'm only a kid." "No your my kid. go!""fine", said Lief.as I scrambled out the door I felt a cold breeze in my face.I could already see my first challenge, it was the Forest of Death."Lief what up?""Barda what are you doing here.!!?"

Michael

THE DAY I ALMOST DIED

I was squashed in the packet.  Then a huge stinky hand picked me up by my neck and put me in his mouth.  I pinched his throat.  He screamed.  I saw my chance, his mouth was wide open. I sprinted up his throat but didn't see his tonsils and I fell over and then I was back where I started.  I was slipping back.  I grabbed his throat and pulled myself up until I could get a firm grip and pulled myself up so if I fell or started to slide back down his throat then I could just grab his tonsils then I would be stable. I pinched his throat.   He screamed, I saw my chance again.  I ran for my life. I dived out of the boy's mouth and and landed face first in the bowl. I sprinted out the open door and down the road and into the bushes and I lived happily ever after.

Zac

Suck,  suck, em ,em, I could taste the sugary moisture. It was sloppy and moist.



All I could smell was  that delicious jelly baby .





All I could see right on that  plate was the last jelly baby.  My family looked at me and I looked at my family.  Everything was silent the ?...

Squish, I could HEAR the squishy  sensation.

Mason

MASON-THE DAY I DIED!

I was trapped under my family and friends. I got taken out of the packet and thrown into a mouth and slowly  melted. I  was getting swallowed  and I grabbed it's throat. I fell and I  climbed  and ran into it's eye ball.  I saw a way out,  it was an ear.  I jumped splat.   I could not walk "squeak " I quickly  crawled away from the mouse .

Jordie

 I felt the squishy nice jelly baby in my mouth as I chewed. 
 Yum as I ate the juicy jelly baby. 
 Crunch, crunch, I was eaten alive.
Ahhh the sweet smell of jelly babies.
Splat, splat the juicy jelly baby rolled around my mouth.

Dylan

As I walked in my room I saw colourful jelly babies. As I picked one up it smelled tasty. I put the jelly baby in my mouth. I heard a  squishy noise as I put it in my  mouth.It tasted  nice.  I could hear it squishing.

Christiaan

When I walked into the room I could smell thousands of flavors come pushing towards me. And I could see a mountain of shrunken up faces. As I touched the soft stretchy skin of the  jelly baby I wanted to eat it in seconds. as I bit down into the jelly baby I could hear chewing and the taste was amazing.    

Katie

Katie 

I could see fantastic amazing colours on the plate making me want to eat them. I could see small faces wanting to be  eaten. 

I could smell sweet tropical tasty faces waiting to be eaten.They looked really, really tasty.

I could hear my saliva and my teeth working together to try and eat it.

I could feel rubbery slimy sticky jelly babies before eating.

I could taste fruity, hard, nice tasting jelly babies in my mouth. I could feel my mouth and throat was working hard to chew and swallow.  They were really nice and chewy.

  

Kane-The day I died


I was in the packet  squished  up on a mountain of my family. Then I heard a big rip!!!! We all tumbled out of the packet into the bowl.  Our bones were all broken, we couldn't escape. I heard something killing my family!!!! I was the only one left and I couldn't move.These were my last words "HELP!!!!!!" Suddenly I got picked up......I saw a black hole coming up???"AHHHHHHHHHH my legs are gone!!!" I heard saliva in the black hole.....or was it a black hole? I fell down something....ahhh something was burning me. I started to climb up. I saw an exit...I was climbing out. I was free.....for now.

Stella

Pandas



''Haaa'' I said at the top of the tree.''It's so nice to be a panda, you can climb up trees and eat bamboo'' I said to myself.

''Peter , Peter'' shouted my mum. So I jumped on a branch, then backed flipped to another branch and one more jump....THUMP, I landed on my tummy.

''Nice landing'' said my sister, like she could do better than me. ''Hurry up you two, we have to clean out the bamboo garden," Mum said in a fun voice.'

'Ohhh, I just want to stay in my tree'' I moaned. We opened up the door to the bamboo garden and guess what we saw.  All the bamboo was gone. ''I have never seen it empty  before'' I  said.

My big sister blamed it on me. My mum ran to my dad and told him and they both ran to it and it was FULL OF BAMBOO. I knew something was up.  So I ran to my tree.  I hopped on one branch then another back flipped off that one then I jumped into bed.



The end

Zac - The day I died

I was in the cardboard all alone.  Crash, bang.  The cardboard doors flew open.  Weeeee  I got lifted into the air.   Nerrr splat.  I landed face first.  All I could see was plate.  Arrrr a monster.  I could feel his warm furry paw clamped on me.  My last word was "stupid boy.  Put me down."  Unfortunately my head was in a cave.  I had been swallowed.

Christiaan - The day I died

Crash!!!  As I was the first to hit the ground then I felt something push me again onto  the ground.  Suddenly a mountain of my family was on top of me.  Then I saw I saw some hands coming towards me then I was lifted up into the air.   My family was crying out for me.  Then crunch.

Josh - The day I died

I am sitting in the car going somewhere.  My little brother is sitting on me.  I ask mum quietly "Where are we going?"  Suddenly we stopped.  My family was thrown onto a bench.  I was gobbled up.  I wrenched my hands up and fell into a dark hole and exploded.

Jarrod - The day I died

I was squashed in my home with my family.  I was face first into my other family members feet.  His feet smelt like sugar.  I cold hear footsteps getting closer...I was banging amongst my brothers.  Suddenly it stopped and I felt sick.  Suddenly I could hear a big rip.  I looked up and saw a big white patch.  Luckily they were just putting me in a round glass thing.  I was so thankful.  But they picked me up and I got my head bitten off.  Suddenly I died.

Dylan

I was squashed. And then a person came.  He bought us.  Then we all banged into each other. Then the giants went on a boat.  The ate all of us.  They pushed me off.  Then I saw something.  It was dun, dun, dun.  Yaw it was a shark.  It gobbled me all up. Yum yum yum.  I was gone dead.