Tuesday, September 3, 2013

Terror Bird Dylan

Terror birds eat wolves, saber tooth tigers, and horses . The enemies of a saber tooth tiger are wolves. It sneaks up on their meat.  It kills other animal's food. It is the biggest meat eater bird. They died out.        


Wednesday, August 21, 2013

Pitcher Plants-Mason


Pitcher Plants-Mason

Classification
The pitcher plant is a carnivore.
Description
This is what the pitcher plants looks like. Pitcher plants are hairy green tubes but their colours can be red or pink too. They have lids at the top. They have a sugary smell on it. Some are big or small. It has leaves and acidy water inside it.
Where it lives
Pitcher plants live in jungles or swamps.
What it does it do
They eat small things like rats, frogs, bugs and other small animals. The bug slips down into the acidy water, but it only eats the soft parts of the body.

pitcher plant jordie

CLASSIFICATION


 The pitcher plant is a carnivore plant


DESCRIPTION

This is what a pitcher plant looks like. It has a very hairy back. Its colours are green, red, pink and yellow. When a bug falls in, it drowns in acidy water. It is sticky on the outside but on the inside it is very slippery. This is what a pitcher plant looks like.


WHAT IT DOES 

This is what a pitcher plant does. The pitcher plant makes poisonous acid to drench its victims. It eats its victims and leaves a pile of skeletons on the bottom of it. These are some things a pitcher plant does.

hi this is my story about venus fly traps by katie

Venus fly trap
This is what a venus fly trap looks like.
the venus fly trap is purple inside it's mouth and green on the outside with red long sharp  lines
on it.                                     

 where venus fly trap live 
they live in  swamps in California.

what they do 
They ooze out gunk. First they attract small insects. Once they go inside the insect has to touch two hairs, then the venus fly trap will shut on the insect and it is dead.

pitcher plants

 
A pitcher plant is a carnivore This is what a pitcher plant looks like. It has a long tube. Its yellow, red green and purple. It has a sugary liquid called nectar. It is very sticky. It atttracts insects like flies so the fly flies into the tube and slips. It kills by making the bugs slip into poison.
Those are the reasons why it is a carnivore.
The brakes bit, the wind howled and the sound of the aeroplane made my ear drums shatter."Everyone get your luggage and get off board"said the black and white pilot called Sam in a croaky voice. Bang,bang,bang the footsteps cut out all the other sounds around me. I slowly got out of  the cracked old wooden seat and walked towards the white and green exit. Clang, clang I went down the metal stairs to the floor to catch the yellow taxi."Where do you want to go sir?""To the 5 star hotel." When we got to the hotel we got charged 100 dollars.

Wednesday, August 14, 2013

demon bird Jordie

The demon bird is a species of bird.


The demon bird has small feathers. It has a very sharp beak that can kill in one slice. It also has needle pointed wings to kill its prey it has long legs that have very sharp claws. It has small spikes on top of its head.

FLABBY WABBY!!!!! SO CUTE BY KATIE

Flabby Wabby 
The Flabby Wabby is a bird. It had orange wings,brown spots red outline. They have a small wobbly beak, big, soft wings, small beak and a very wobbly eye. Flabby Wabby mates.  They kiss then pop a egg comes out.Then the male makes a special incubator and the egg stays in their for 3 weeks and then a wee baby Flabby  Wabby is born. 

What a Flabby Wabby eats
Flabby Wabby eats food that pops out of their belly button which is carrots and jelly rainbow jelly.


Where Flabby Wabby lives
Flabby Wabby lives in a beach house by the sea. She lives in the sand in her big big nest. It is tall and long and wide.

















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the terror bird

                                                                          the terror bird

the terror bird has a long sharp beak to strike opponents its deadly claws can rip its prey in half. at a size of 2 metres almost three. it can swollow an animal hole its very strong. And it is related to the t-rex it lays its eggs in the open and predators attack.




The glawcies has hot,slimy,sticky feet.Its bony neck is good for taking  attacks.This creature does not use its sharp claws instead it uses its feet to jump on enemies and hot sticky substance goes on them and burns them alive.You will mostly find them on and under the sand in africa.It lays its eggs on the substace it created so enemies cant get them.Its brown feathers melt to create the substace on its feet.Its favourite food is lions and bears.

Terror bird-mason

Terror bird-Mason


Terror birds are 2 metres high with a big sharp beak. Long legs , they run fast with their legs to catch their prey. their super long legs are helpful for the terror bird. They have a muscly head. The terror bird has a long , long neck to help them. They started like this they lift it head up then 
fast down to stab the prey.

Wednesday, July 31, 2013

katie saber tooth tiger

saber tooth tiger

The saber tooth tiger is one metre high 
and is twice as heavy as a morden lion,it has a stocky highed front and they are basicly built like a bear they  they have the longest teeth for eny animal, they have teeth like a knife and their teeth are narrow dangerous weapons to them.

Stella's E book


Read the Zoo Mission

Wednesday, July 10, 2013

Bounce bounce bounce as dylan flew through the air suddenly thud dylan fell to the cold hard ground ouch me kane and jarrod said. My turn I thought a black shiver speed up my spin my heart was pounding my chest was going to inplod suddenly smack everything went black...?

stella swings

swings


''Put on your smelly,stinky shoes and you can go play on the swings at the park'' yelled Mrs Carr.So i ran to the swings and jumped high on it.I felt the cold wing go though my hair.Then a bunch of birds flew by i could hear them talking to each other.All i could feel was the frezzing cold air go right tough me.It was nie to go to the park for once and swing on the swings.
kane fun
as i took my first steps closer to the tree i heard screams  of happynise .i finaly  got to the tree and i put my cold hand on the first branch and i felt green squishy moss all over..as soon as i got onto the first branch fear filled my mouth and all i could smell was the world.

The trampolne JOSH

"Weee" I screamed as I bounced up and down on Michael's big black trampoline. I could feel the wind blowing in my cold face. Jordie did a really cool front flip 180 degrees and Mason tried doing a flip but he smashed his face in to his knee. After that we got to go play at the park and swing on the swings Jordie and I went in the hedge and we hid in there until it was time to go.


THE TRAMPOLINE TRIP

The writers club and I went walking down to Michael's house to play on the trampoline. When it was my go I fell and whacked my knee onto my teeth.  All I could taste was blood and metal. I was in pain for a while. Then we went to the parkand  we climbed the trees, I could smell wood around me. When we started to walk balk to school Dyan was super slow, he ran into a tree two times and fell over . We thought he was being silly.
By Mason

Wednesday, June 5, 2013

motor cross magic Jarrod




Pup, pup, pup, Shane tried to start his motor-cycle.
It turned out he had no fuel . So I said "Check the fuel tank."
" Is it that ?"
"Noooooooo! It won't be that." Shane said. Beeeeep, it was the start of the awesome bike race. "Oooooooooooh I know what it is. It's the fuel tank."
 "That's what I just said". 
"Oh.". Well what are you waiting for get me some fuel."ok,ok, jeuss idiot"So i went to get some fuel and i accidently got the boost fuel so i drunk some to go faser but it sorta kinda did make me slower "weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee i can fly" But it was me going to heaven any way back to Shane he reved his engine an got past all of the other guys apart from this one guy that was  cheating by using hp ( horse power) and he and i still got in front of him and it was won by me "yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!" i said.   ASTALAVESTA LITTLE GUY said an asian guy i was sared and pooed my long johns i went to the tolit and it stunk ahhhhhhahhhhhhhh it stinks i died the end. dundundun

THE LITTLE BOY FROM CHINA - JOSH

The little Chinese boy loved snakes, his favorite type of snake was a boa constrictor. He talked about them every day and every birthday he asked for a boa constrictor. One year his  parents got him one because they got sick of him asking every year. Two years later he was giving it a bath and the Chinese  boy felt hungry so he started to eat a sausage in front of the big snake.  His tummy rumbled and his tummy hurt. The snake's favorite food was sausage so the snake got jealous.  The snake was angry because he liked sausages and the boy didn't share.  So the snake squeezed the boy to death.  His guts flopped everywhere over the red tiles.  It smelt like vomit and the smell stunk out the whole house. His mum wondered what the smell was so sprinted upstairs and saw    him lying in a pile of blood and guts with the snake eating him.  

THE END

Jordie

one upon a time there was little Chinese baby. He was 8 months old. his family was poor and he had to bath himself. one day when he was having a bath the door was wide open and a boa constrictor crept through the door. I crept towards  the  bath then it stuck its fangs into the babies head and the bath went red  the snake grabbed the baby and took it out the door.
 
 
 
 
THE END
 
 

Sabre tooth hunting Christiaan

Roar!I called  out to my pack "What's wrong sabre? " Toothy said in a dark evil voice. " I heard a rustle in the light green leafy bushes. Ribbit I was scared onto my back. " Lets go hunting"  Toothy said. Look there is a dark shadow at the shadow pond suddenly our pack came, then I said "attack" but the shadow called his dark pack.

katie the mermaid story

the mermaid story

Woosh, I splashed into the water wishing to be a mermaid . Suddenly I turned into one, what I've been wishing for  for my whole entire life I said to myself. I was adorable with glittery sparkles all over.  My favourite colour was pink. my baby turned into one too. She was adorable with  glittery sparkles all over I  had to hold her so she wouldn't brake her tail bye falling so I took her home  and and I went home and I  went shopping well her big sister looked after her I got seaweed chips and meat and veges for tea tonight then I went home and looked after my baby.

To be continued 


Secret Misson Dylan

I was a secret agent police . I had a mission to get baddies. Then I saw a baddy . I told my friends...I punched the baddy in the face.I said "Lllll." My hand felt like there was no blood. Bang, my ears went beeeeep. There  was a boom. A guy died.  His blood came pouring outof his head and tummy. I saw the baddies. They stabbed 3 people. They had blood come out of them. I could hear pshhhh and dripping blood.  I could smell smoke from the bomb.

   

The snake moster-Mason

The snake monster-Mason

A long time a go there was a little chinese boy. He had a bath in a bucket. One night he had a bath and a snake slithered in the bath with the boy, it bit him then it swallowed him. The parents were looking for him for 10 years. The parents felt like  big fat losers.

Zach

Suddenly I got shooved into a rocket and blasted into space because my planet  Middle Earth was  under attack . By zashens my name is Chase.  Where I'm going I don't know. CRASH I landed. This  is going to sound weird but it's my new planet,3rd earth.  There are flying cars, robot police and most coolest one of all crystal  swords . That is ssssssssssssooooooooooooo cool but when I got into this world I got super powers. I could shape shift.

Hippo Stella


Hippo

I felt proud of my little baby Hippo. It was his first time in the refreshing water.I swam beside him.He is just the right size and he can just touch the bottom.''Come on,it's lunch time''said the zoo keeper. But he didn't, he just splashed the water all around. I tried pushing him.Then he just turned around and ran under me.I hopped out of the cold water. I walked to the food. Suddenly I saw my baby was not in the  water.The zoo keeper shouted...''HELP''. Then I turned around and in front of my eyes. He was out the cage.    

agent cody banks Kane

I was stranded in the middle of the Amazon and my only tools were my spy tools like my crystal grappling hook, my pitch white exploding mentos, my lucky spy watch and my best one, my super powers.  By the way my name is Rex and I work for the C.I.A  and my code name is K12. It's the end of the world and my only way out of here is to grapple hook out of here...

michael's story.

"Vroom"  Bob's motor-bike started and the crowd roared.  He could se all the x game signs.  He was so nervous as if he bailed all the crowd would laugh at him (and if you haven't noticed he is in the x-game final and needs 8 points to win).  He revved up his engine.  He put both his feet on the pedals then he zoomed up the biggest jump and did a 360 tuck no hander back flip. He smashed into the ground and bailed.  It came around to Bob's turn again and he now needed 12 points to win he zoomed out the tunnel the crowd rowed again.he went up the jump and tried the siam trick as before because he new it would get him 19 points.he went up the jump and did the trick then boing he landed softly back on his bike.The commentator said "thats a big 19 points to win it for Bob Billy.Three hours later he was back at the  X Games stadium for the presentation of the medals.  First they said "Tom Hutchins for 3rd place." The crows all cheered for him, then they all went quiet.  They announced Ethan Mirfen for second place.  They also cheered for him.  They ten announced Bob Billy for first place.  The crowd all roared.  Then they played the NZ national anthem and put up the three flags of the winners.  When the song was playing they bought out the medals.  Then the crowd clapped and cheered.  Then they bought out the million dollar cheque because that was the prize for winning the X Games.  But it still wasn't enough to buy a new motor bike as he smashed his one when he bailed.

Monday, June 3, 2013

Week 5 Learning Goals 4th June

Kane, Zac and Dylan  

We are learning to use compound sentences.

Jarrod, Micheal, Christian, Stella, Katie

We are learning to use complex sentences.


Wednesday, May 29, 2013

The fishing trip by Jarrod

The fishing trip

"Splash" I heard my hook hit the water. Suddenly I saw a big silver, fish jump. I reeled in my rod. I struggled to real in my fish but it came onto the humungous boat. The boat had a big cab  by the front of the boat. Yay I get to drive the boat. I almost crashed. 

MASON JACOB OLSEN--Killing my snowman

                                                  Killing my snowman


" K splat" I thew a bright red Apple at the snowman's head.  The snow was flying in the air.   I felt happy that we were allowed to kill our super white snowman.  When it's head fell me and Danny jumped on it's head and it's body and we both laughed happily.   It had a green hunting beany hat.  The eyes and half of the head flew off.   It crumbled and cracked into little balls like hail.

THE RUGBY GAME by Jordie

''Come on Dad" I said because he was taking a long time to get ready for the rugby game. We were versing the worst team in the grade. When we arrived there was ice on the pitch. We started doing training. I almost came first in the sprints. but James was the fastest in the team.


Die Snowman Josh M

Whoosh! Bang! My long , brown cricket bat went flying into the little icy snowman. His broken
head flopped on the ground like a fish out of the water. I kicked the body with my big black gum boots off the deck and it exploded onto Ethan. He got angry because it fell down his top.




Anaconda attack by Christiaan

Vrrm the boat roared as we went down the river. There was a crashing sound in the foggy distance, it kept on creeping closer and closer . Woosh, the boat went flying down a water fall. Crash! the giant boat hit something at the bottom of a rocky pit " help" someone cried. But I couldn't get up and I saw something that was green and was coming for me.  

Zac - Snow

All you could hear is shouting and laughing until you turn around .  Whoosh, as the snowball hit me twice one came at my face.   My teeth were frozen cold  so I went inside and had a hot chocolate. Then I went out side to gain revenge so i got that kid back man revenge is sweet.

Hunting for food by Dylan

I was hungry, so were the others. So we hunted for food there were 36 of us .Then I said "wow".   We saw a fish then I got it .It was enormous.  Then crkkkkkk I said "the ice is breaking. Then a guy fell in. He died.  Luckily we had swords to hang on to the ice.We hung on the ice but two more guys fell in and died .Then I said jump.

 to be continued 


snow day by michael

"Awww" I looked the gray window it's snowing I yelled to my brother he said"year right".I was jumping on my blue bed I could also smell breakfast cooking in the kichen.I could hear the mattress going  "creek" I thought it would snap I could feel my bed under me.Mum said "come on Michael I have breakfast cooking.

Snow - Stella

SNOW FALL


''Wow, it's snowing''as I looked out the window.Me and Ruby wanted to play in it right away.So we raced down stairs.We told mum.''Can we please go in the snow mum?'' Ruby said. ''Yes,dress up warm''. We ran to the front door.And I chose a warm jacket and gumboots then I put on warm pants. We chased the the other door .A freezing cold snow flake landed on my nose.A few minutes later we had an awesome snow ball fight.Like an hour later I tripped up on Ruby's snow fort.
THE END.

Disney on ice- Katie

Disney  on ice

I was amazed when I saw the amazing rink it was beautiful with big gardens and a big beautiful castle that kept changing themes . First a beautiful fairy called Tinkerbell came on she was the main character , of it it was Tinkerbell she had a wand that had glitter in it had fairy dust in it. she put it on the ice it was awesome .








Snow - Kane

Thanks mum!My mum just gave me a soft biscuit.I looked out the hard window.there were white snowy beads everywhere.I tried to eat my biscuit but my mouth fell down and my biscuit  fell to the ground.My mum shouted out to me.What was that.my biscuit.she was furious.but I cleaned it up before she saw it.I heard the soft snow hit the hard land

by Kane



Wednesday, May 22, 2013

THE BIKE TRIP by Jordie

Me and my lovely friend Josh decided one day to go on a big biking trip . It took a while to get there but when we arrived dad
  noticed he had left his helmet at home so he went home and me and Josh went on our own . after while we saw a couple of moose wandered off and they walked away from the pack and started to charge at Josh.  Then whack the moose hit Josh in the side of the neck.  I thought his life was in my hands.  I jumped off my bike and grabbed a big stick for Josh and he was knocked out.  When I got closer I saw the blood was squirting out. I ran back and got my cellphone and got the helicopters to pick him up.  I had just saved my friend's life.

Christiaan The Shark Attack

Bang!!! I heard something and then I went down into the engine room and I saw the engine was fine.  Thud, there was another one so I went back on the deck.  Then I saw that there was something coming up to the surface.  Crunch, the giant sea animal bit onto the ship.  Then I noticed there was more coming for me.  I flicked my hand to start the engine but it wouldn't stop.  Suddenly my eyes flung over to one of the sharks heading away.  So I tossed a rope onto the shark and it tossed and turned trying to get away from me.  Then it stopped and was coming towards my boat...

Dylan Kayaking

I was ready to go on my kayak. So as I paddled as my eyes flashed with danger it was a waterfall. It was deathly. I tried  to  paddle but the water was too powerful but I survived. I just noticed that this area is so dangerous.Then I saw fearful piranhas. I was scared.  They were biting my boat. Luckily I had TnT. Then I threw it in the water. Bang they swam away but my boat tipped over.


katie the circus


The Circus
 I was fizzing with excitement when the lights went off. The show was about to began, first they introduced the man from Australia they did flips over the chairs and all did hand stands on top of  chairs. I thought it was amazing. At the end which was sad there were people on a rope they tied their feet to it and hung upside down . The man did it first then the girl climbed to the top over him she did a hand stand holding the rop it was awesome.  Then boy got down she stood up and she did tricks for a bit then she untied the rope then the adults and children counted down 5,4,3,2,1 drop. She dropped  the boy caught her . It frightened me when she fell.

Josh M-lion

There was a lion on sticks chasing a giraffe. The lion got ready to pounce. The lion has a big mane. It did a big pounce on to the giraffes back. The giraffe fell to the ground like a big rock. It shrieked loudly when the lion bit its neck.


the moose attack by michael

I was out for a casual bike ride in the forest, when I saw a flat straight.  I sped up.  I was going as fast as I could, then smack a moose smashed into me. I went flying into a tree. The moose pulled off my arm. I could see a spurt of blood spraying out. I could see it lying on the ground. It looked all flimsy and the veins looked like pipes and it smelt really bad. Then it got into its pulling motion on my head next thing I knew I died. The end by Michael

Zac Deltora


This is Deltora. It was consumed by the evil Shadow Lord. He has these grey guards. They leave these little marks. It means they have been here. I'm Leif and this is Barda and Jasmine. The king and queen went into hiding because of the Shadow Lord .The belt of Deltora had seven gems that got scattered all over Deltora in the worst of the worst places, the Forest of Scilence.  The Lake of Tears,  City of Rats, Shifting Sand, Dread Mountain, Maze of the Beast and the Valley of the Lost are all guarded by ugly monsters and here's the map.





Jarrod Bike Ride

Whoosh, I could feel the wind rushing against my face. I was riding my red,stripy,mountain bike on the track and someone was in front of me. Suddenly a moose rammed the guy in front of me off his bike. "That dirty old moose" I said. Oh well he will survive. So I left him to heal. It was starting to get dark so I headed back but in the distance I could see a big green blob. I biked towards it, when I got closer i saw that it was a broccoli house "just what I wanted". That's what I wished for when I was ten and it came true in 25 years. Ok it is pitch black now but there was a light switch. i flicked it on and there was the bed I went closer and climbed in and went to sleep. Oops I almost forgot to turn off the light so I got out of bed and turned it off and crawled back into bed. I'm so tired... Ding,ding,ding the alarm went. I started travelling again. I came to a road but it wasn't any road it was a magical road. I drove down it and there was my house. Ok I'm scared.
         

Stella

Knock,knock,knock went Chris at the door. So they came in and we showed them mums funny book.It's  called 'How Do You Know Your Cat Is Plotting To Kill You' and it comes with a poster.Dad got it for her on Mothers Day.  My cousin got another guinea  pig.It is called Pixie and his other one is called Percy.  Then he was carrying an iPad .He sat the sofa and played mind-craft  And  he found plenty of shiny gold. Pixie is white and Percy is brown,black and white . Pixie's eyes are orange they are creepy. Pixie would not stop moving and Percy would not eat any food.

MASON-My secret fishing spot not

     MASON-My secret fishing spot not

"broom broom"stepped on the pedal and drove fast out to my secret fishing spot. "zip"I cast out just out in the best spot to get fish. "I curt one"I yelled. I put it in the bucket. I cast again I cart one again "cop" I put it in the bucket, "what where is the first one"cop""give it back you dumo bear."cop munch crunch snap cop crunch"I got kill a fid from the bear. I full into the water lots of people spoted me including bob. He cried for a long tim. The blood pored every where in the water and I was deid for every and could not ring me back to life
                                                        THE END!!!

Kane Deltora

Crunch, crunch, crunch went the tiny leaves under me.My dad had screamed out to me to come to the hard castle.Creak I opened the giant door my dad was in bed fading.He grabbed out a silver shiny belt and said put the magical gems into it. "What gems?" said Lief."The gems of Deltora, but to get them you need to fight furious beasts.When you get all the gems you will have to fight the Shadow Lord with the gems.""But I'm only a kid." "No your my kid. go!""fine", said Lief.as I scrambled out the door I felt a cold breeze in my face.I could already see my first challenge, it was the Forest of Death."Lief what up?""Barda what are you doing here.!!?"

Wednesday, May 15, 2013

Michael

THE DAY I ALMOST DIED

I was squashed in the packet.  Then a huge stinky hand picked me up by my neck and put me in his mouth.  I pinched his throat.  He screamed.  I saw my chance, his mouth was wide open. I sprinted up his throat but didn't see his tonsils and I fell over and then I was back where I started.  I was slipping back.  I grabbed his throat and pulled myself up until I could get a firm grip and pulled myself up so if I fell or started to slide back down his throat then I could just grab his tonsils then I would be stable. I pinched his throat.   He screamed, I saw my chance again.  I ran for my life. I dived out of the boy's mouth and and landed face first in the bowl. I sprinted out the open door and down the road and into the bushes and I lived happily ever after.

Zac

Suck,  suck, em ,em, I could taste the sugary moisture. It was sloppy and moist.



All I could smell was  that delicious jelly baby .





All I could see right on that  plate was the last jelly baby.  My family looked at me and I looked at my family.  Everything was silent the ?...

Squish, I could HEAR the squishy  sensation.



Mason

MASON-THE DAY I DIED!

I was trapped under my family and friends. I got taken out of the packet and thrown into a mouth and slowly  melted. I  was getting swallowed  and I grabbed it's throat. I fell and I  climbed  and ran into it's eye ball.  I saw a way out,  it was an ear.  I jumped splat.   I could not walk "squeak " I quickly  crawled away from the mouse .

Jordie

 I felt the squishy nice jelly baby in my mouth as I chewed. 
 Yum as I ate the juicy jelly baby. 
 Crunch, crunch, I was eaten alive.
Ahhh the sweet smell of jelly babies.
Splat, splat the juicy jelly baby rolled around my mouth.

Dylan

As I walked in my room I saw colourful jelly babies. As I picked one up it smelled tasty. I put the jelly baby in my mouth. I heard a  squishy noise as I put it in my  mouth.It tasted  nice.  I could hear it squishing.


Christiaan

When I walked into the room I could smell thousands of flavors come pushing towards me. And I could see a mountain of shrunken up faces. As I touched the soft stretchy skin of the  jelly baby I wanted to eat it in seconds. as I bit down into the jelly baby I could hear chewing and the taste was amazing.    

Katie

Katie 

I could see fantastic amazing colours on the plate making me want to eat them. I could see small faces wanting to be  eaten. 

I could smell sweet tropical tasty faces waiting to be eaten.They looked really, really tasty.

I could hear my saliva and my teeth working together to try and eat it.

I could feel rubbery slimy sticky jelly babies before eating.

I could taste fruity, hard, nice tasting jelly babies in my mouth. I could feel my mouth and throat was working hard to chew and swallow.  They were really nice and chewy.

  

Kane-The day I died


was in the packet  squished  up on a mountain of my family. Then I heard a big rip!!!! We all tumbled out of the packet into the bowl.  Our bones were all broken, we couldn't escape. I heard something killing my family!!!! I was the only one left and I couldn't move.These were my last words "HELP!!!!!!" Suddenly I got picked up......I saw a black hole coming up???"AHHHHHHHHHH my legs are gone!!!" I heard saliva in the black hole.....or was it a black hole? I fell down something....ahhh something was burning me. I started to climb up. I saw an exit...I was climbing out. I was free.....for now.


Stella

Pandas



''Haaa'' I said at the top of the tree.''It's so nice to be a panda, you can climb up trees and eat bamboo'' I said to myself.

''Peter , Peter'' shouted my mum. So I jumped on a branch, then backed flipped to another branch and one more jump....THUMP, I landed on my tummy.

''Nice landing'' said my sister, like she could do better than me. ''Hurry up you two, we have to clean out the bamboo garden," Mum said in a fun voice.'

'Ohhh, I just want to stay in my tree'' I moaned. We opened up the door to the bamboo garden and guess what we saw.  All the bamboo was gone. ''I have never seen it empty  before'' I  said.

My big sister blamed it on me. My mum ran to my dad and told him and they both ran to it and it was FULL OF BAMBOO. I knew something was up.  So I ran to my tree.  I hopped on one branch then another back flipped off that one then I jumped into bed.



The end


Sunday, May 12, 2013

Zac - The day I died

I was in the cardboard all alone.  Crash, bang.  The cardboard doors flew open.  Weeeee  I got lifted into the air.   Nerrr splat.  I landed face first.  All I could see was plate.  Arrrr a monster.  I could feel his warm furry paw clamped on me.  My last word was "stupid boy.  Put me down."  Unfortunately my head was in a cave.  I had been swallowed.


Christiaan - The day I died

Crash!!!  As I was the first to hit the ground then I felt something push me again onto  the ground.  Suddenly a mountain of my family was on top of me.  Then I saw I saw some hands coming towards me then I was lifted up into the air.   My family was crying out for me.  Then crunch.


Josh - The day I died

I am sitting in the car going somewhere.  My little brother is sitting on me.  I ask mum quietly "Where are we going?"  Suddenly we stopped.  My family was thrown onto a bench.  I was gobbled up.  I wrenched my hands up and fell into a dark hole and exploded.


Jarrod - The day I died

I was squashed in my home with my family.  I was face first into my other family members feet.  His feet smelt like sugar.  I cold hear footsteps getting closer...I was banging amongst my brothers.  Suddenly it stopped and I felt sick.  Suddenly I could hear a big rip.  I looked up and saw a big white patch.  Luckily they were just putting me in a round glass thing.  I was so thankful.  But they picked me up and I got my head bitten off.  Suddenly I died.


Dylan

I was squashed. And then a person came.  He bought us.  Then we all banged into each other. Then the giants went on a boat.  The ate all of us.  They pushed me off.  Then I saw something.  It was dun, dun, dun.  Yaw it was a shark.  It gobbled me all up. Yum yum yum.  I was gone dead.