Weshavan secret well

Early in the morning I saw a right light gleaming in the air. Splash as a fish darted in the air I caught it then I clutched on it really hard. Slime dripped from the top of my head fear ran down my spine
It wasn't slime it was blood.

Brodie's snow storm

The snow storm 

As I walk  out the back door my hands are freezing cold.  All  around me I see silky thin snowflakes falling on the rock hard ground, I can hear the whistling wind flowing around my face as I was walking back inside the house. I took a couple of steady steps the thick thin snow flakes are falling down like heavy rain I hear thunder as I looked up in the sky.

By Brodie

Snow day by Jackson

The cold air ran through my lungs as snow fluttered down from the sky. There was so much snow it looked like the arctic circle! The snow glowed in the dim light . The snow slowly floated down to the soft ground . I felt numb like I have just fallen over and into a fishing hole .
                                                   THE END

Weshavan snow storm

As I slowly walked to the door cold rushed down my spine like a car driving on ice. I could see the thick snow falling slowly on the ground like a feather.  The freezing cold snow froze my face then I sprinted back in my house.

Brodie blobs in a bottle

Jackson's blobs in a bottle

William H blobs in a bottle

Tyler's blobs in a bottle

Genevieve Russell

I could see a ginormous colossal squid as I could hear the people on the radio talking to us. Suddenly I saw a huge silverly fish getting eaten by the ginormous colossal squid.   After that I started to say on the radio that "there is a ginormous colossal squid in front of our small blue submarine and it is munching on a huge silvery fish." I thought they are probably surprised that we finally saw one! I started to feel amazement inside me. Just at that moment I saw colossal squid kind of dancing and that was one of the best times of my life.

Weshavan the colossal squid

As we dragged our bodies out of bed I saw a colossal squid. I screamed "hold on tight."  Splash, as we could hear the water bashing on the window.   Then we zoomed down to the dark zone. Wow a colossal squid nibbling on a silver I thought. Then I got the camera. I started to video for 26minutes. After I finished videoing it darted away like a bullet.

tejal the submarine

Splash, boom, as a submarine bounced in the blue silky water. I was frightened that it was it going to eat me!!! I could see them taking photos. I was more and more frightened. I could hear them dashing down in the submarine as I was zooming down. Then the people who came under water gazed up. I thought I should swim away before they came back in the water. I was not scared. The people who came in the water didn't come back.

Lucas Olsen - Colossal Squid 🐙

"WOW! This is the first Colossal squid ever found alive" shouted Jackson . We were gazing at the colossal squid.We could hear the sea water crushing the sub. We could see the squid eating another squid, then it let of its food. That was the last glimpse of the squid. We were wondering how long we where in the sub for. We checked "we were there for 23 minutes" whispered Carter.

caleb colossal squid

WOW! This is the closest encounter of a real life colossal squid yelled Carter in a loud voice,as I could not stop staring at the gigantic,long tentacled squid I wanted to film more footage.But the giant squid let go and dashed away in a hurry.

Colossal squid sighting Jackson

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" Get ready to go down" I said, as me and my crew of scientists scrambled into the cramped submarine "are the oxygen tanks full ?"I questioned the co pilot . "You have five minutes till dropped."said the co pilot . "One minute" said the co pilot. 5, 4, 3,3 2, 1 BOOM the submarine had been dropped !!
Soon enough the submarine began to sink down slowly ...
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"I wonder what we will see" I exclaimed to everyone. I was so excited I was quivering. That's when a COLOSSAL SQUID dove past !!!!!! 'What a discovery" I shouted ! We had no choice but to follow it
So we did and of course it was feasting on a fish because they eat every 12 minutes !!! ( true fact )

"We might be the only humans to ever see a colossal squid so we should video it," I insisted "we could be famous."
 THE END BY JACKSON

William -hawk

Woosh, air raced past my scruffy face and I could see dinner a squirrel. It's show time to get that tiny squirrel I thought In my head as I was standing still in a gigantic green tree. "Ar ar," I opened my ugly wings and swooped down. I missed him I kept swooping and turning until the squirrel went in its nest. I was frustrated. The only way to get him is by breaking into his nest I thought. Here it goes donk my face hit the nest. Clonk, the squirrel hit the hard ground. I saw that tiny squirrel's legs moving like a piston. It was amazing but I still need yummy dinner "ah ha it looks like I have him, noooo he is in his hide out, dang it". I am so disappointed I thought in my sore head. "I'll get you one day....

Ignitors - colossal squid

Caleb - Touch Tank

"Wow"I quietly whispered as I picked up the bumpy star fish. The water was ice cold.  The big camouflaged crab was huge. The sea anemone felt sticky and  I heard splashing noises. The animals I saw were starfish,crabs and limpets. It's smelt like lots of salt water inside.  I felt scared because I thought that someone was going to do something to me "Time's up. We're going to the next activity said the lady loudly.

Lucas Olsen-The sub

"Stop pushing" I shouted as Sophie shoved me. while I was looking through the glass. I felt like punching her in her face but I didn't. It was  cooler when we went deeper. we could see all sorts of fish on the TVs then the camera died.  We went back up to land "that was awesome."😺

Genevieve - Touch Tank

Look at those tiny sea animals I whispered quietly as I was staring in the dirty touch tank. I started to touch the orange bumpy sea star and I liked the feel of it.   After that I saw 3 huge black dirty camouflaged crabs and I touched one for one second, but it didn't move.  I saw some green and brown seaweed and it felt so slimy, it  felt like sponge.  I saw some little grey fish swimming around also I felt excited inside me.

Weshavan hawk chasing squirel

As I could feel the hot sun burning my face. I saw a hawks claws,digging in the branch. "Ahh" I screamed as its eyes opened. It saw me with its two gigantic eyes aiming like a gun. Ahh I screamed as I could feel fear going down my spine .

Scary story Jackson

the warm breeze flew on my fur , as I spotted an acorn . I strode over to it and grabbed it . Then I started to nibble on it slowly . Then I heard a loud CRACK !! A branch had snapped off a tree and it was falling straight at me !! I sprinted away as fast as my little , bony and stiff legs would carry me . When I got away I felt like I was being watched by something or SOMEONE !!!! then I glanced up and spotted a HAWK !! It was watching me like a stalker . Then I saw him jump . I thought he might not be chasing me . But then he swooped down just above me !!! I finally got it through my thick skull . He's chasing me !!! I ran up a tree but there was a gap !!! I had to jump but I didn't have the courage to jump but it was ether me or my corage . I picked corage . I landed in my nest . Then I pecked out the hole and the hawk was still there it was making an attack plan !!! I need to get out of here I thought to myself. Just at that moment the hawk swooped in and destroyed my nest I fell out ... CRASH !!!!!       The end by Jackson

THE ROCKY SHORE - Jackson

                                                          THE ROCKY SHORE
"Ewh that's gross"I shouted as I was staring at a midget crab with no shell ! ( you don't see that every day ! ) I felt the scruffy , damp and slimy rocks . I was determined to uncover the slimy rocks . The next rock I turned over had a massive crab under it !!!! About five minutes later Caleb said  " stop turning rocks over," then he told us to look at a tiny crab he had found, it was black and purple!!! Next I found a sea anemone I put it under water and after about 5 minutes the tentacles came out they looked awesome . By Jackson.

william H- rocky shore crab

"I found a massive purple crab everyone"I screeched as I stared at the creepy crab on the rocky shore. Wow this is strange and awesome I thought in my head. I looked to the crystal clear water and said "thank you" silently. All I could smell was the disgusting water and the nice fresh air. All I could hear was everyone talking and shouting out ideas and estimating. After everyone had talked about the gigantic,purple pincer crab. I started lifting up rocks and moving rocks around. The rocks I was lifting were sharp like a knife. When I found the crabs under other rocks they just ran away awkwardly but they were fast, like a fish.

Weshavan the rocky shore

"Wow" I screamed as I saw a scary old scraggly crab. As I lifted my hand over a rough seastar it felt like prickles. "Ahhh," as I could feel fear going down my spine. I could see rough seastars. Whoosh as the water swooped past like a shark, I felt the water vibrating. After that I picked up a ginormous crab trying to blend in with the soft sand. Then we found a humongous limpet crawling on an old broken rock.

Lucas Dion Olsen - At the playground

This is going to be fun I thought in my head . Me and Caleb ran to the spinning thing ,we went so fast that I was going to puke.  We rolled on the grass down the hill.  Then we went on the seesaw, it was like I was going up and down on the waves.  I went on the swing, when I was on it I could see the gigantic kindy.  I could see the houses like tiny ants.

Tejal - At the park

This is going to be fun" I thought in my head. I could hear the cold windy air. I felt inside happy and excited. When I was rolling down the hill I felt dizzy. I could taste the yucky grass coming in my mouth when I was rolling down.  I ran onto the slide so I can have lots of turns. My heart was almost floating away in the air but it did not.  After I could the humungous blue sky.  I could see the cats, dogs and a big blue sea and lots of cars.  I could smell grass and strong air coming towards me.  After that it was time to go,  I thought I should do this again another day.

Genevieve

Finally we can play in the small park I thought in my head. I started to head towards the steep, blue slide so I could slide down it.  When I was sliding fast down the slide I could feel the metal I was sliding on and also the air was blowing into my small mouth.  I saw the field was bigger than a ginormous dinosaur and also I could see the gigantic white waves as I was sliding down the slide.  I could smell the dry green grass.  After that I ran towards the hard, rough seesaw and I hopped on it with Tejal. We went up and down on it.  When I was sitting on the seesaw there were lots of houses as small as ants.  The big and small cars looked colourful and I was feeling excited inside me.  I could hear the traffic and the bugs chirping louder than a bumble bee.  Suddenly I heard the wind blow faster than a cheetah.  I hated the feel of the hard metal I was sitting on but the see saw was still fun.  

Fun at the park

Weshavan the dangerous swing

This might be dangerous I thought. As I could hear cars going past like a train losing control. I lay down on the green rough grass with my eye shut like I was dead. Then I opened my eyes and I raced back on the swing then I jumped into the air and landed on the ground while rolling down. I could feel the dry grass. After that we went back to school and as I was walking I could see the bright blue sky.

Caleb The Playground

I want to go faster I thought in my head. The brightness of the sun hurt my eyes. I could hear the wind rushing through my ears. The green grass felt damp,smooth and rock hard. At last I got off and I was very dizzy but it was awesome.

William H seesaw fun

I'm having a jolly good time I thought in my head. Wow I'm having a joyful time but it is annoying when your just gripping on to cold metal handle. The only thing I could smell was the fresh grass. There was the loudest weedeater I have ever heard, it's cutting sounded like a baby crying. I was pushing my legs up and down like a piston in overdrive and from where I was sitting on the seesaw the houses looked smaller then ants. All the time it felt like energy rushing through my sore body. The end

Jackson see saw experience

                                                   
Ouch, this hurts I thought. I told William he could stop now but he said no. I could see the blue and flat ocean, the soft green grass and the grassy soccer field. I could smell the fresh grass and the fresh air. I felt sick like I was on a sinking boat. I wanted to puke ( not to get out of school! ) After the see saw I went over to the hill and rolled down them. I did it because I knew a fast way to roll. After rolling down I felt  dizzy and it looked blurry. I was rolling like a bucket of lava.

CALEB - TAKE A BREATH

"Wow."  Splash as I dived into the deep blue sea.  The rough fish were swishing through the water.  Under the sea they have turtles, stingrays, sharks, rocks, fish and many more.  The person next to me was Lucas the scientist.  I was amazed by the colours of the different types of fish.  I saw blue and green.  "Hey quick, times up.  If we don't go quick we'll drown!"

Tyler take a deep breath

"Wow I can't believe this it's so cool "As I was kicking my long,long legs I saw sharks,rocks,coral and   turtles.The rocks were gigantic.There are so many bubbles. What's that small fish? I thought.  Yay, it's not fish. It's a school of fish.  There is are many sea creatures. I was amazed at everything. as I swam back up to the surface I was happy.

William harbrow - take a breath

🎣"This is going to be awesome I said. I jumped in the freezing cold water like a penguin. As soon as I jumped in the water my mouth was full of disgusting salt water and then I finally got to the bottom of the ocean where all the awesome colourful fish are. Wow there are all kinds of different fish here big,small and,gigantic fish in schools I thought in my head. Why can I still hear the whispering of the crashing waves above? Man I really hope that sting ray dosen't hurt me. I'm too worried, its time to go back up. The waves get louder and louder as I got further up to the surface.

Tejal take a breath

"This is so amazing" I shouted.There are lots and lots of fish coming from school.There are turtles here too.I could do swimming , kicking , flicking, zooming and breathing.I could feel that I was going so deep that I could see the sharks catching the fish. It was a big one. I could feel the  strong waves coming towards me.And I could feel inside my heart pumping fast and I was happy too...that I came under water. I was thinking those fish were  cool and they were big like a ginormous whale. The water was getting cold and I was getting cold too. I came out of the water but first I said  bye to the creatures then came out. It was a great adventure for me. The End. By Tejal

TRAIN ROLLING Jackson

"Ow" I yelled "ow" I yelled again as I smashed my head onto the rock solid dirt about a million times.  All I could see was the sky and semi dry grass. I could hear room 3 screeching at a cricket game. When I approached the finish line I said "I might sit here for a while I can't stand up because I'm too dizzy. I was rolling like a run away train! Next up was the races. I didn't  get a turn until last but I was versing William. All I could see was blue and a yellow brown sort of colour. When I reached the finish the first thing I said was "did I win?" I was full of pain like a chicken with a bullet in its head .

Lucas Doin Olsen - Take a breath

"This might be amazing😀" called Lucas. Me and Caleb took a deep breath we had to kick strongly.I could see all sorts of fish. There were sharks,stingray and blowfish. They past me like missiles.I could taste salt, it was gross. I felt sand ,rocks like metal and seaweed. It was so gooey and gross. I felt like I was going to puck and I felt scared."I can hear fish splashing past us Lucas" called Caleb.

Weshavan - Take a Breath

'This is amazing'.I could feel the water splashing at my face.Snap I could hear a bite of a big ugly shark. I could see a bright light shining, at me who's there? I screamed, then the light turned off. Wait I thought,  he was going but he got eaten by a great white shark. After that a school of snappers came and saved my life.

Jackson - Take a breath

"How cool is this?" I am deep down in the ocean with no one to disturb me ! Hey look at that tiny , shiny and colourful fish I thought . That cave looks cool I'm going to explore it. I dove into the cave like a dolphin. It looked like the inside of the titanic ( when it was lying there for a long

time) it was mossy , cold , disgusting and slippery! I got out of there as fast as I could .  Then a school of fish dove past me. I thought I'll be a fish, so I followed them . I wasn't fast enough because they just swam away . I thought I could  take swimming lessons or maybe  fish lessons ! Then a group of dolphins swam past me and I tried to follow them but it didn't work out because they were dolphins and I was too slow because I'm just a human being .

Genevieve take a deep breath

Look at those small colourful fish I bubbled .Suddenly I saw a blob of very small fish swimming very slow fast past me then I saw a mid size shark swimming along the deep cold smelly yucky sand.I could also see a ginormous green turtle swimming very slow like a snail and also I could smell the  salty green sea weed. I saw a huge sting ray. I think that was cool the water made a splash. I could also feel the freezing cold water and I felt amazing inside me.

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