As I walk out the back door my hands are freezing cold. All around me I see silky thin snowflakes falling on the rock hard ground, I can hear the whistling wind flowing around my face as I was walking back inside the house. I took a couple of steady steps the thick thin snow flakes are falling down like heavy rain I hear thunder as I looked up in the sky.
By Brodie
Wow Brodie your hands must have been freezing in whistling wind!
ReplyDeleteStar - I like how you painted a picture in my head with your wow words "steady steps" "silky thin snowflakes"
Wish - Try using different sentence starters
Great hook Brodie. From Tyler
ReplyDeleteGreat hook Brodie. From Tyler
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