The demon bird is a species of bird.
The demon bird has small feathers. It has a very sharp beak that can kill in one slice. It also has needle pointed wings to kill its prey it has long legs that have very sharp claws. It has small spikes on top of its head.
Star from other children are:
ReplyDelete- That you used the word prey.
- Most of the time you used capital letters correctly.
- naming the different features
- very sharp was good.
- small feathers
Star from Mrs Carr is that you used factual adjectives!
Wishes from other children are...
- Capitals for all f your sentences.
- missing an s off it