time) it was mossy , cold , disgusting and slippery! I got out of there as fast as I could . Then a school of fish dove past me. I thought I'll be a fish, so I followed them . I wasn't fast enough because they just swam away . I thought I could take swimming lessons or maybe fish lessons ! Then a group of dolphins swam past me and I tried to follow them but it didn't work out because they were dolphins and I was too slow because I'm just a human being .
Wednesday, February 18, 2015
Jackson - Take a breath
"How cool is this?" I am deep down in the ocean with no one to disturb me ! Hey look at that tiny , shiny and colourful fish I thought . That cave looks cool I'm going to explore it. I dove into the cave like a dolphin. It looked like the inside of the titanic ( when it was lying there for a long
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I like how you described the fish weshavan
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ReplyDeleteI really liked the amazing descriptive words in the story and how the words made me feel as if I was their, and once I watched the video it sprang too life for me. Great job JC. Toni Campbell
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