Wednesday, February 18, 2015

Lucas Doin Olsen - Take a breath

"This might be amazing😀" called Lucas. Me and Caleb took a deep breath we had to kick strongly.I could see all sorts of fish. There were sharks,stingray and blowfish. They past me like missiles.I could taste salt, it was gross. I felt sand ,rocks like metal and seaweed. It was so gooey and gross. I felt like I was going to puck and I felt scared."I can hear fish splashing past us Lucas" called Caleb.


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6 comments:

  1. childrenMarch 2, 2015 at 2:55 PM

    Wow great writing Lucas there is some weird boxes though Jackson

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  2. childrenMarch 2, 2015 at 2:56 PM

    🐥 nice discibing how you kick your legs

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  3. childrenMarch 2, 2015 at 2:56 PM

    I like how you said the fish went past you like a misile

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  4. childrenMarch 2, 2015 at 3:04 PM

    I liked how you that past you like a missile🐣

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  5. Miss CollinsMarch 4, 2015 at 8:07 PM

    Super writing Lucas ! I really like how you said the sharks, stingrays and blowfish past you like a missile .

    Keep up the great work Lucas. :)

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  6. Sharlene GoodwinMarch 4, 2015 at 10:55 PM

    This is fantastic writing, Lucas! You've done a great job using describing words (I like gooey and gross) and using your different senses. Keep up the hard work!

    Mr Fry

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