Wednesday, February 18, 2015

Weshavan - Take a Breath

'This is amazing'.I could feel the water splashing at my face.Snap I could hear a bite of a big ugly shark. I could see a bright light shining, at me who's there? I screamed, then the light turned off. Wait I thought,  he was going but he got eaten by a great white shark. After that a school of snappers came and saved my life.


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3 comments:

  1. childrenMarch 2, 2015 at 2:50 PM

    I like your writing You used some great wow words like ugly and big

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  2. childrenMarch 2, 2015 at 2:53 PM

    I like how the snapper saved your life. William

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  3. childrenMarch 2, 2015 at 3:01 PM

    It' s funny how you got competition
    😄

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