Suddenly I got shooved into a rocket and blasted into space because my planet Middle Earth was under attack . By zashens my name is Chase. Where I'm going I don't know.
CRASH I landed. This is going to sound weird but it's my new planet,3rd earth. There are flying cars, robot police and most coolest one of all crystal swords . That is ssssssssssssooooooooooooo cool but when I got into this world I got super powers. I could shape shift.
I wonder why your planet was under attack.
ReplyDeleteStar - I liked the strong verbs you used shoved and blasted.
Wish - You need to tell a story using beginning, middle and end. What happened at the start? What happened in the middle? What happened at the end?