Wednesday, June 5, 2013
michael's story.
"Vroom" Bob's motor-bike started and the crowd roared. He could se all the x game signs. He was so nervous as if he bailed all the crowd would laugh at him (and if you haven't noticed he is in the x-game final and needs 8 points to win). He revved up his engine. He put both his feet on the pedals then he zoomed up the biggest jump and did a 360 tuck no hander back flip. He smashed into the ground and bailed. It came around to Bob's turn again and he now needed 12 points to win he zoomed out the tunnel the crowd rowed again.he went up the jump and tried the siam trick as before because he new it would get him 19 points.he went up the jump and did the trick then boing he landed softly back on his bike.The commentator said "thats a big 19 points to win it for Bob Billy.Three hours later he was back at the X Games stadium for the presentation of the medals. First they said "Tom Hutchins for 3rd place." The crows all cheered for him, then they all went quiet. They announced Ethan Mirfen for second place. They also cheered for him. They ten announced Bob Billy for first place. The crowd all roared. Then they played the NZ national anthem and put up the three flags of the winners. When the song was playing they bought out the medals. Then the crowd clapped and cheered. Then they bought out the million dollar cheque because that was the prize for winning the X Games. But it still wasn't enough to buy a new motor bike as he smashed his one when he bailed.
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I would feel nervous in front of a big crowd like that too!
ReplyDeleteStar - great use of strong words to make your story interesting for the reader "bailed" "zoomed" "nervous"
Wish - Finish typing :) I will help
Great story Michael - looking forward to seeing and hearing you explain what a 360 tuck no hander back flip looks like. Waiting for next instalment.
ReplyDeleteGreat finish to the story Michael. Wow must be some bike if one million can't replace it.
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