Wednesday, June 5, 2013

Sabre tooth hunting Christiaan

Roar!I called  out to my pack "What's wrong sabre? " Toothy said in a dark evil voice. " I heard a rustle in the light green leafy bushes. Ribbit I was scared onto my back. " Lets go hunting"  Toothy said. Look there is a dark shadow at the shadow pond suddenly our pack came, then I said "attack" but the shadow called his dark pack.
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  1. Mrs CarrJune 6, 2013 at 1:49 PM

    Toothy sound scary with a dark evil voice.

    Star - I like how you described the light green lefty bush, I could really picture it in my head.

    Wish - It is hard ro tell who the characters are. I think you need to add extra detail as I am a little bit confused about what is happening.

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