Wednesday, June 5, 2013

Secret Misson Dylan

I was a secret agent police . I had a mission to get baddies. Then I saw a baddy . I told my friends...I punched the baddy in the face.I said "Lllll." My hand felt like there was no blood. Bang, my ears went beeeeep. There  was a boom. A guy died.  His blood came pouring outof his head and tummy. I saw the baddies. They stabbed 3 people. They had blood come out of them. I could hear pshhhh and dripping blood.  I could smell smoke from the bomb.

   

1 comment:

  1. Lucky you caught the baddy.

    Star - I like how you added extra detail at the end using 2 of your senses hearing and smell.

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