THE LITTLE BOY FROM CHINA - JOSH
The little Chinese boy loved snakes, his favorite type of snake was a boa constrictor. He talked about them every day and every birthday he asked for a boa constrictor. One year his parents got him one because they got sick of him asking every year. Two years later he was giving it a bath and the Chinese boy felt hungry so he started to eat a sausage in front of the big snake. His tummy rumbled and his tummy hurt. The snake's favorite food was sausage so the snake got jealous. The snake was angry because he liked sausages and the boy didn't share. So the snake squeezed the boy to death. His guts flopped everywhere over the red tiles. It smelt like vomit and the smell stunk out the whole house. His mum wondered what the smell was so sprinted upstairs and saw him lying in a pile of blood and guts with the snake eating him.
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What a scary experience for the mother. I wonder what she does next?
ReplyDeleteStra - Good description of how hungry he felt.
Wish - We had to do lots of re-crafting together. Next time before publishing make sure you have added extra detail and strong words without my help.