A long time a go there was a little chinese boy. He had a bath in a bucket. One night he had a bath and a snake slithered in the bath with the boy, it bit him then it swallowed him. The parents were looking for him for 10 years. The parents felt like big fat losers.
How scary having a snake slither into the bath.
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