I want to go faster I thought in my head. The brightness of the sun hurt my eyes. I could hear the wind rushing through my ears. The green grass felt damp,smooth and rock hard. At last I got off and I was very dizzy but it was awesome.
Great writing Caleb! Feeling dizzy is a funny but fun feeling isn't it. I liked how you said that the brightness of the sun hurt my eyes. Keep up the awesome work!
Great writing Caleb! I love all the great description you've used! From Mr Fry
ReplyDeleteGreat writing Caleb! Feeling dizzy is a funny but fun feeling isn't it. I liked how you said that the brightness of the sun hurt my eyes. Keep up the awesome work!
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