Wednesday, March 4, 2015

Weshavan the dangerous swing

This might be dangerous I thought. As I could hear cars going past like a train losing control. I lay down on the green rough grass with my eye shut like I was dead. Then I opened my eyes and I raced back on the swing then I jumped into the air and landed on the ground while rolling down. I could feel the dry grass. After that we went back to school and as I was walking I could see the bright blue sky.


2 comments:

  1. I am pleased it wasn't dangerous jumping off the swing!
    Great use of similes!
    This writing painted a picture in my head.

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  2. That's not good that you thought that the swing was dangerous
    William

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