Wednesday, March 18, 2015

Weshavan hawk chasing squirel

As I could feel the hot sun burning my face. I saw a hawks claws,digging in the branch. "Ahh" I screamed as its eyes opened. It saw me with its two gigantic eyes aiming like a gun. Ahh I screamed as I could feel fear going down my spine .
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4 comments:

  1. childrenMarch 18, 2015 at 2:35 PM

    Very short but very scary comment by jackson

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  2. Mrs CarrMarch 19, 2015 at 6:13 PM

    It would have been fearful to have eyes like guns watching you!

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  3. childrenMarch 25, 2015 at 2:17 PM

    Tyle
    I Like claws diging part

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  4. R McKeeverMarch 30, 2015 at 12:38 AM

    Wow it sounds a scary hawk! I like your line about his eyes opening. I could really see that in my mind.

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