"Wow" I screamed as I saw a scary old scraggly crab. As I lifted my hand over a rough seastar it felt like prickles. "Ahhh," as I could feel fear going down my spine. I could see rough seastars. Whoosh as the water swooped past like a shark, I felt the water vibrating. After that I picked up a ginormous crab trying to blend in with the soft sand. Then we found a humongous limpet crawling on an old broken rock.
I like how you put lots of description into your story comment by Jackson
ReplyDeleteThat sound scary touching the rough sea star. This is an amazing piece of writing and you painted a strong picture in my head.
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