Monday, March 2, 2015

William harbrow - take a breath

🎣"This is going to be awesome I said. I jumped in the freezing cold water like a penguin. As soon as I jumped in the water my mouth was full of disgusting salt water and then I finally got to the bottom of the ocean where all the awesome colourful fish are. Wow there are all kinds of different fish here big,small and,gigantic fish in schools I thought in my head. Why can I still hear the whispering of the crashing waves above? Man I really hope that sting ray dosen't hurt me. I'm too worried, its time to go back up. The waves get louder and louder as I got further up to the surface.


5 comments:

  1. Wow I love your writing and I love your wow words

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  2. Wow your writing is great and I love your wow words

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  3. That you jumped in the freezing cold water like a penguin.
    Lucas

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  4. I like your use of wow words like gigantic colourful and school

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  5. Asome beginning man.
    TylerπŸ˜ƒπŸ—Ώ

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