Monday, March 2, 2015
William harbrow - take a breath
π£"This is going to be awesome I said. I jumped in the freezing cold water like a penguin. As soon as I jumped in the water my mouth was full of disgusting salt water and then I finally got to the bottom of the ocean where all the awesome colourful fish are. Wow there are all kinds of different fish here big,small and,gigantic fish in schools I thought in my head. Why can I still hear the whispering of the crashing waves above? Man I really hope that sting ray dosen't hurt me. I'm too worried, its time to go back up. The waves get louder and louder as I got further up to the surface.
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Wow I love your writing and I love your wow words
ReplyDeleteWow your writing is great and I love your wow words
ReplyDeleteThat you jumped in the freezing cold water like a penguin.
ReplyDeleteLucas
I like your use of wow words like gigantic colourful and school
ReplyDeleteAsome beginning man.
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