All you could hear is shouting and laughing until you turn around . Whoosh, as the snowball hit me twice one came at my face. My teeth were frozen cold so I went inside and had a hot chocolate. Then I went out side to gain revenge so i got that kid back man revenge is sweet.
awesome
ReplyDeletefrom kane maby
i liked how you put in ''i went out side to gain revenge
ReplyDeleteI like how you described how your teeth felt...frozen cold. It made me feel for you as the reader.
ReplyDeleteWish - Continue to work on full-stops and capitals as I had to get you to change them :)