The fishing trip
"Splash" I heard my hook hit the water. Suddenly I saw a big silver, fish jump. I reeled in my rod. I struggled to real in my fish but it came onto the humungous boat. The boat had a big cab by the front of the boat. Yay I get to drive the boat. I almost crashed.
That would have been really cool seeing a big, silver fish jump out of the water and lucky that you didn't crash the boat when you drove it.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you used interesting adjectives to describe your fish and boat. Keep up the great writing.
Miss Collins
That's what happens with fish, suddenly they appear then they vanish just as quick.
ReplyDeleteMaybe we will catch a big silver fish from our boat soon?
Great work mate!
PS: the above comment is from your dad :-)
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