Wednesday, May 22, 2013
Kane Deltora
Crunch, crunch, crunch went the tiny leaves under me.My dad had screamed out to me to come to the hard castle.Creak I opened the giant door my dad was in bed fading.He grabbed out a silver shiny belt and said put the magical gems into it. "What gems?" said Lief."The gems of Deltora, but to get them you need to fight furious beasts.When you get all the gems you will have to fight the Shadow Lord with the gems.""But I'm only a kid." "No your my kid. go!""fine", said Lief.as I scrambled out the door I felt a cold breeze in my face.I could already see my first challenge, it was the Forest of Death."Lief what up?""Barda what are you doing here.!!?"
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Deltora sounds like an exciting place with giant doors and your dad fading.
ReplyDeleteStar - you used great adjectives to paint a picture int he reader's head.
Wish - add more...I want to know what happens next on your adventure
Mrs Carr