Bang!!! I heard something and then I went down into the engine room and I saw the engine was fine. Thud, there was another one so I went back on the deck. Then I saw that there was something coming up to the surface. Crunch, the giant sea animal bit onto the ship. Then I noticed there was more coming for me. I flicked my hand to start the engine but it wouldn't stop. Suddenly my eyes flung over to one of the sharks heading away. So I tossed a rope onto the shark and it tossed and turned trying to get away from me. Then it stopped and was coming towards my boat...
Wow that sounds scary. I wouldn't like it if a giant sea animal bit onto my ship. That was a good idea throwing a rope at the shark.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you varied your sentences in your writing Christiaan, they are much more exciting than using then.
Opps that last comment was from Miss Collins
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