Whoosh! Bang! My long , brown cricket bat went flying into the little icy snowman. His broken head flopped on the ground like a fish out of the water. I kicked the body with my big black gum boots off the deck and it exploded onto Ethan. He got angry because it fell down his top.
Sounds like you had lots of fun destroying the snowman. I like the way you described the the head falling to the ground like a fish out of water. Keep using good describing words in your writing.
i liked how you sacked your bat in it's body
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ReplyDeletethat is so epic josh what about the photo.
ReplyDeleteSounds like you had lots of fun destroying the snowman. I like the way you described the the head falling to the ground like a fish out of water. Keep using good describing words in your writing.
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Whoosh! Bang! Great way to start a story, Josh. Keep up the good work.
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