I was squashed. And then a person came. He bought us. Then we all banged into each other. Then the giants went on a boat. The ate all of us. They pushed me off. Then I saw something. It was dun, dun, dun. Yaw it was a shark. It gobbled me all up. Yum yum yum. I was gone dead.

Star - I liked how you used sounds in your writing.
ReplyDeleteHow scary being gobbled up by a shark!
ReplyDeleteMrs Carr
that was so epic
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ReplyDeletenice story dylan!!!!!!!!
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