Hunting for food by Dylan

I was hungry, so were the others. So we hunted for food there were 36 of us .Then I said "wow".   We saw a fish then I got it .It was enormous.  Then crkkkkkk I said "the ice is breaking. Then a guy fell in. He died.  Luckily we had swords to hang on to the ice.We hung on the ice but two more guys fell in and died .Then I said jump.

 to be continued