Wednesday, May 22, 2013

Dylan Kayaking

I was ready to go on my kayak. So as I paddled as my eyes flashed with danger it was a waterfall. It was deathly. I tried  to  paddle but the water was too powerful but I survived. I just noticed that this area is so dangerous.Then I saw fearful piranhas. I was scared.  They were biting my boat. Luckily I had TnT. Then I threw it in the water. Bang they swam away but my boat tipped over.


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  1. childrenMay 22, 2013 at 8:46 PM

    Sounds like your kayaking trip was very scary! I would have been scared too when I saw the piranhas and I am glad that you had tnt to scare them away.

    I really like the interesting words you have used Dylan!! Ka pai.

    From Miss Collins

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  2. childrenMay 22, 2013 at 8:57 PM

    i like the tnt part from:jarrod

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  3. Mrs CarrMay 23, 2013 at 12:45 PM

    Wow - what an exciting and dangerous adventure in your kayak.

    Star - I liked how you said your eyes "flashed with danger"

    Wish - To write compound sentences with 2 ideas in them.

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