I was in the packet squished up on a mountain of my family. Then I heard a big rip!!!! We all tumbled out of the packet into the bowl. Our bones were all broken, we couldn't escape. I heard something killing my family!!!! I was the only one left and I couldn't move.These were my last words "HELP!!!!!!" Suddenly I got picked up......I saw a black hole coming up???"AHHHHHHHHHH my legs are gone!!!" I heard saliva in the black hole.....or was it a black hole? I fell down something....ahhh something was burning me. I started to climb up. I saw an exit...I was climbing out. I was free.....for now.
The black hole sounded scary! I am pleased you escaped :)
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i liked how you put went in a black hole and i also liked how you put in AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
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