Katie
I could see fantastic amazing colours on the plate making me want to eat them. I could see small faces wanting to be eaten.
I could smell sweet tropical tasty faces waiting to be eaten.They looked really, really tasty.
I could hear my saliva and my teeth working together to try and eat it.
I could feel rubbery slimy sticky jelly babies before eating.
I could taste fruity, hard, nice tasting jelly babies in my mouth. I could feel my mouth and throat was working hard to chew and swallow. They were really nice and chewy.
Chewing jelly babies sounds like hard work having to chew lots! Yum. I hope you enjoyed them.
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All those amazing colours on the plate, what a joy it must have been to see a plate full of jelly babies. I imagine your mouth was salivating with all the yummy smells and colours.
ReplyDeleteI wish I was there with you so we could have shared the jelly babies with each other.
What a wonderful story you have here Katie. I will look forward to reading more and more of your great stories in the weeks to come.
Lots of Love
Dale
i liked how you put in i could see a whole plate of jelly babies .And i also liked how you put there where faces that wanted to be eaten.
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i wish you could put in more detail in your writing
thank you stella
Deletestop using the word eat
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