MASON-THE DAY I DIED!
I was trapped under my family and friends. I got taken out of the packet and thrown into a mouth and slowly melted. I was getting swallowed and I grabbed it's throat. I fell and I climbed and ran into it's eye ball. I saw a way out, it was an ear. I jumped splat. I could not walk "squeak " I quickly crawled away from the mouse .
I am pleased you jumped away from the mouse and survived!
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Mrs Carr
you make awesome storys
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