''Haaa'' I said at the top of the tree.''It's so nice to be a panda, you can climb up trees and eat bamboo'' I said to myself.
''Peter , Peter'' shouted my mum. So I jumped on a branch, then backed flipped to another branch and one more jump....THUMP, I landed on my tummy.
''Nice landing'' said my sister, like she could do better than me. ''Hurry up you two, we have to clean out the bamboo garden," Mum said in a fun voice.'
'Ohhh, I just want to stay in my tree'' I moaned. We opened up the door to the bamboo garden and guess what we saw. All the bamboo was gone. ''I have never seen it empty before'' I said.
My big sister blamed it on me. My mum ran to my dad and told him and they both ran to it and it was FULL OF BAMBOO. I knew something was up. So I ran to my tree. I hopped on one branch then another back flipped off that one then I jumped into bed.
The end
My brother use to blame things on me too! I wonder who had eaten all the bamboo.
ReplyDeleteI like how you wrote your story from the perspective of the PANDA.
how cool what a fab story, stella your peter, i loved how you have included your sister in the story. your story was so descriptive and interesting, i could have read more. mummy x
ReplyDeletestar i like your hook at the start haa i said at the top of the tree
ReplyDeletewish could you add more to what it was like cleaning the bamboo garden
from katie
i like your panda
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