snow day by michael
"Awww" I looked the gray window it's snowing I yelled to my brother he said"year right".I was jumping on my blue bed I could also smell breakfast cooking in the kichen.I could hear the mattress going "creek" I thought it would snap I could feel my bed under me.Mum said "come on Michael I have breakfast cooking.
I liked how you put'' i was jumping on my blue bed
ReplyDeleteYum that must have been good smelling the breakfast cooking in the kitchen and must have been really fun jumping on the bed.
ReplyDeleteI like how you started in the action and how you used your senses.
Miss Collins