Wednesday, May 29, 2013

Snow - Kane

Thanks mum!My mum just gave me a soft biscuit.I looked out the hard window.there were white snowy beads everywhere.I tried to eat my biscuit but my mouth fell down and my biscuit  fell to the ground.My mum shouted out to me.What was that.my biscuit.she was furious.but I cleaned it up before she saw it.I heard the soft snow hit the hard land

 by Kane

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  1. childrenMay 29, 2013 at 7:30 PM

    I liked how you dropped your biscuit on the ground.

    And i also i liked how you put''i could see beads

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  2. childrenMay 29, 2013 at 7:41 PM

    i like ( there were beads looking )

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  3. childrenMay 29, 2013 at 7:49 PM

    how hard is it rock hard

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  4. childrenMay 29, 2013 at 7:54 PM

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  5. childrenMay 29, 2013 at 7:55 PM

    what did the look like

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  6. childrenMay 29, 2013 at 7:56 PM

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  7. Mrs CarrMay 30, 2013 at 10:22 PM

    Good idea to clean it up before it got seen.

    I like how you described what you could see looking out the window.

    Next step is to learn to use question marks

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