Anaconda attack by Christiaan
Vrrm the boat roared as we went down the river. There was a crashing sound in the foggy distance, it kept on creeping closer and closer . Woosh, the boat went flying down a water fall. Crash! the giant boat hit something at the bottom of a rocky pit " help" someone cried. But I couldn't get up and I saw something that was green and was coming for me.
i liked how you put in ''in the foggy disdance
ReplyDeletethat was so scary!!
ReplyDeleteWow that boat ride sounded very scary especially when you went down the waterfall and hit the rocky pit. I really like how you started in the action and how you used interesting adjectives.
ReplyDeleteMiss Collins