Wednesday, May 29, 2013

THE RUGBY GAME by Jordie

''Come on Dad" I said because he was taking a long time to get ready for the rugby game. We were versing the worst team in the grade. When we arrived there was ice on the pitch. We started doing training. I almost came first in the sprints. but James was the fastest in the team.


4 comments:

  1. i liked how you put in'' come on dad''

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  2. Sounds like you were frustrated that your Dad was taking so long to get ready. It must have been really cold getting ready for the game if there was ice on the pitch!

    Miss Hubac

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  3. Ooh that ice on the pitch sounds really shivery cold.... brrrr... I think you need to put your thermals on!! I like how you started your paragraph with "Come on Dad"...that's a great way to start with "speaking"!!
    Love Mum

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