Wednesday, May 15, 2013

Christiaan

When I walked into the room I could smell thousands of flavors come pushing towards me. And I could see a mountain of shrunken up faces. As I touched the soft stretchy skin of the  jelly baby I wanted to eat it in seconds. as I bit down into the jelly baby I could hear chewing and the taste was amazing.    
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  1. GBSparentMay 19, 2013 at 3:38 PM

    The thousands of flavours all pushing towards you at once sound delicious!!!

    Great use of strong words Christiaan.

    Mrs Carr

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  2. GBSparentMay 19, 2013 at 11:22 PM

    I like the way you describe the jelly baby. The soft stretchy skin is a good description. From Mum

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